What I did with the TYM by l. Hughes

I did the work sheet that mr.joe gave to us and used the little piece of the story to help me

Thankful for thanksgiving

Thankful for thanksgiving

I am thankful for my house that I always need

I am thankful for my parents that want me to succeed

I am thankful for my brothers that cracks me up

I am thankful for my dog because that is my little mutt

I am thankful for my hair so soft and thick

 I am thankful for doctor she helps me when I’m sick

I am thankful for my cheer team they are like sisters

I am thankful for my legs because I am a sprinter

I am thankful for my brain because I like to be smart

I am thankful for Asha because I know we are friends from the bottom of my heart

I am thankful for my teacher he teaches me well

I am thankful for my mouth so I can always tell

I am thankful for my real sister

I am thankful for my fingers so I can write tongue twisters

I am thankful for my nose so I can smell

I am thankful for my hands they blocked me when I fell

                                             I am thankful for thanksgiving when my family gathers together

Because I know we will love each other forever

Why we didn't get it done

We didn't get a video done because the partnership wasn't the best choice so their was arguing and things like that.

My Published Piece

http://youtu.be/vVnA9EEEzPQ

Link to video 

                                                               My Skinny iPad Mini
      "Are we going to somerset?" I asked my dad. It was just the start of my birthday and the reason I asked that question was because I was going shopping for my brand new iPod before my actual party!
"Yes we are going to somerset." My dad replied. 
  About five minutes later we pulled up in a gigantic packed parking lot with a big building that said "SOMERSET" in big fancy cursive letters. I started at the car door and climbed out. there was an employee standing next to my dad's car talking him into valet parking. Soon enough I could see the guy driving my dad's 2010 white Cadillac into the giant valet only parking space. About ten second later my dad and I walked inside of big fancy mall.

     "Excuse me, do you know where the apple store is my dad asked a woman with black hair and pail skin at the customer service desk."down by the Microsoft store and them turn to your left."

     My dad and I sped down to where the lady told us to go

      As soon as we got there I felt like was in heaven with so much technology around me. My dad and I walked up to a woman with dirty blond hair and what seemed like she had a good attitude .

  "How can I help you." She said.

   "I'm looking for an iPod for for her." He eye balled me in a you and you little ipod of yours cost a lot of money type of way.

The lady and my dad talked of what seemed like for ever. Finally my dad walked over to where the iPods were because I was by the iPods.

"They don't have any more iPods and I tried to get an ipad mini but the don't have that ethier." My dad said. My face went from the ends of my lips to my ears to the grumpy cat face. Right when we were about to walk out. Of the store I heard the lady's voice.

"Wait!" She blurted out. My dad and I walked back over to her. She looked at another employee. It was an old man with gray hairs and he had a smile as bright as the sun. The lady walked me over to him. He turned around with an ipad mini in his cold wrinkled hands.
" I have a granddaughter and her birthday is coming up so I need your help starting up this ipad for her." he said quietly and calmly. You dont have to rub it in my face that she gets an ipad and i don't alright old man? i thought angrily. he gave the slightily smaller ipad to me and we walked to the start up station and the lady told me what to do and how to activate the glimmering ipad mini. First I started with putting in and iCloud account. " I want you to put YOUR iCloud account on. The lady said. "I don't have and iCloud account." I said with sadness. Then I started to get a little suspicious. Why did the lady tell me to make and iCloud account for me? And why did they pick me to activate the ipad if it's not mine? I rember when my mom and dad got me a dsi xl for christamas when i was seven and they said that they probloby would not get me one when they did so now i thought they were going to do that again are going to do that same thing again

    Soon when we were done with the activation thingy stuff my dad,the old wrinkly man and the nice lady who helped with the actovation all looked at me with a smerk on every single one of there faces.

    " you know how I said that the ipad was for my granddaughter?" The wrinkly old man questioned. "Yeah." I replied. " well it's actually for you." The man smiled. 

   But I'm not his granddau-- THAT'S NOT THE POINT! I thought to my self so full of excitement.
  As my dad and I approched the cash register with the ipad in the bag wrapped around my wrist i started to think about all the amazing things i would do on it. download games and music and NOT have to share any part of my presonal ipad. And at times like this I want to thank steve jobs for making the best thing ever!
   After my dad finished paying we walked out the store and asked the same man who gave my dad the valet parking pass to drive my dad's car back to us and as soon as the man did that we walked out of the mall and drovae away in no time at all.

                                                               My Skinny iPad Mini
      "Are we going to somerset?" I asked my dad. It was just the start of my birthday and the reason I asked that question was because I was going shopping for my brand new iPod before my actual party!
"Yes we are going to somerset." My dad replied. 
  About five minutes later we pulled up in a gigantic packed parking lot with a big building that said "SOMERSET" in big fancy cursive letters. I started at the car door and climbed out. there was an employee standing next to my dad's car talking him into valet parking. Soon enough I could see the guy driving my dad's 2010 white Cadillac into the giant valet only parking space. About ten second later my dad and I walked inside of big fancy mall.

     "Excuse me, do you know where the apple store is my dad asked a woman with black hair and pail skin at the customer service desk."down by the Microsoft store and them turn to your left."

     My dad and I sped down to where the lady told us to go

      As soon as we got there I felt like was in heaven with so much technology around me. My dad and I walked up to a woman with dirty blond hair and what seemed like she had a good attitude .

  "How can I help you." She said.

   "I'm looking for an iPod for for her." He eye balled me in a you and you little ipod of yours cost a lot of money type of way.

The lady and my dad talked of what seemed like for ever. Finally my dad walked over to where the iPods were because I was by the iPods.

"They don't have any more iPods and I tried to get an ipad mini but the don't have that ethier." My dad said. My face went from the ends of my lips to my ears to the grumpy cat face. Right when we were about to walk out. Of the store I heard the lady's voice.

"Wait!" She blurted out. My dad and I walked back over to her. She looked at another employee. It was an old man with gray hairs and he had a smile as bright as the sun. The lady walked me over to him. He turned around with an ipad mini in his cold wrinkled hands.
" I have a granddaughter and her birthday is coming up so I need your help starting up this ipad for her." he said quietly and calmly. You dont have to rub it in my face that she gets an ipad and i don't alright old man? i thought angrily. he gave the slightily smaller ipad to me and we walked to the start up station and the lady told me what to do and how to activate the glimmering ipad mini. First I started with putting in and iCloud account. " I want you to put YOUR iCloud account on. The lady said. "I don't have and iCloud account." I said with sadness. Then I started to get a little suspicious. Why did the lady tell me to make and iCloud account for me? And why did they pick me to activate the ipad if it's not mine? I rember when my mom and dad got me a dsi xl for christamas when i was seven and they said that they probloby would not get me one when they did so now i thought they were going to do that again are going to do that same thing again

    Soon when we were done with the activation thingy stuff my dad,the old wrinkly man and the nice lady who helped with the actovation all looked at me with a smerk on every single one of there faces.

    " you know how I said that the ipad was for my granddaughter?" The wrinkly old man questioned. "Yeah." I replied. " well it's actually for you." The man smiled. 

   But I'm not his granddau-- THAT'S NOT THE POINT! I thought to my self so full of excitement.
  As my dad and I approched the cash register with the ipad in the bag wrapped around my wrist i started to think about all the amazing things i would do on it. download games and music and NOT have to share any part of my presonal ipad. And at times like this I want to thank steve jobs for making the best thing ever!
   After my dad finished paying we walked out the store and asked the same man who gave my dad the valet parking pass to drive my dad's car back to us and as soon as the man did that we walked out of the mall and drovae away in no time at all.

published piece

                                                               My Skinny iPad Mini
      "Are we going to somerset?" I asked my dad. It was just the start of my birthday and the reason I asked that question was because I was going shopping for my brand new iPod before my actual party!
"Yes we are going to somerset." My dad replied. About five minutes later we pulled up in a gigantic packed parking lot with a big building that said "SOMERSET" in big fancy cursive letters. I started at the car door and climbed out. there was an employee standing next to my dad's car talking him into valet parking. Soon enough I could see the guy driving my dad's 2010 white Cadillac into the giant valet only parking space. About ten second later my dad and I walked inside of big fancy mall.

     "Excuse me, do you know where the apple store is my dad asked a woman with black hair and pail skin at the customer service desk."down by the Microsoft store and them turn to your left."

     My dad and I sped down to where the lady told us to go

      As soon as we got there I felt like was in heaven with so much technology around me. My dad and I walked up to a woman with dirty blond hair and what seemed like she had a good attitude .

  "How can I help you." She said.

   "I'm looking for an iPod for for her." He eye balled me in a you and you little ipod of yours cost a lot of money type of way.

The lady and my dad talked of what seemed like for ever. Finally my dad walked over to where the iPods were because I was by the iPods.

"They don't have any more iPods and I tried to get an ipad mini but the don't have that ethier." My dad said. My face went from the ends of my lips to my ears to the grumpy cat face. Right when we were about to walk out. Of the store I heard the lady's voice.

"Wait!" She blurted out. My dad and I walked back over to her. She looked at another employee. It was an old man with gray hairs and he had a smile as bright as the sun. The lady walked me over to him. He turned around with an ipad mini in his cold wrinkled hands.
" I have a granddaughter and her birthday is coming up so I need your help starting up this ipad for her." he said quietly and calmly. You dont have to rub it in my face that she gets an ipad and i don't alright old man? i thought angrily. he gave the slightily smaller ipad to me and we walked to the start up station and the lady told me what to do and how to activate the glimmering ipad mini. First I started with putting in and iCloud account. " I want you to put YOUR iCloud account on. The lady said. "I don't have and iCloud account." I said with sadness. Then I started to get a little suspicious. Why did the lady tell me to make and iCloud account for me? And why did they pick me to activate the ipad if it's not mine? I rember when my mom and dad got me a dsi xl for christamas when i was seven and they said that they probloby would not get me one when they did so now i thought they were going to do that again are going to do that same thing again

    Soon when we were done with the activation thingy stuff my dad,the old wrinkly man and the nice lady who helped with the actovation all looked at me with a smerk on every single one of there faces.

    " you know how I said that the ipad was for my granddaughter?" The wrinkly old man questioned. "Yeah." I replied. " well it's actually for you." The man smiled. 

   But I'm not his granddau-- THAT'S NOT THE POINT! I thought to my self so full of excitement.
  As my dad and I approched the cash register with the ipad in the bag wrapped around my wrist i started to think about all the amazing things i would do on it. download games and music and NOT have to share any part of my presonal ipad. And at times like this I want to thank steve jobs for making the best thing ever!
   After my dad finished paying we walked out the store and asked the same man who gave my dad the valet parking pass to drive my dad's car back to us and as soon as the man did that we walked out of the mall and drovae away in no time at all.

                                                                iPad mini
      "Are we going to somerset?" I asked my dad. It was my birthday and the reason I asked that question was because I was going shopping for my brand new iPod!"Yes we are going to somerset." My dad replied. About five minutes later we pulled up in a gigantic packed parking lot with a big building that said "SOMERSET" in big fancy cursive letters. I started at the car door and climbed out. there was an employee standing next to my dad's car talking him into valet parking. Soon enough I could see the guy driving my dad's Cadillac into the valet only parking space. About ten second later my dad and I walked inside of big fancy mall.

     "Excuse me, do you know where the apple store is my dad asked a woman with black hair and pail skin at the customer service desk."down by the Microsoft store and them turn to your left."

     My dad and I sped down to where the lady told us to go

      As soon as we got there I felt like was in heaven with so much technology around me. My dad and I walked up to a woman with dirty blond hair and what seemed like a good attitude .

  "How can I help you." She said.

   "I'm looking for an iPod for for her." He eye balled me in a you cost a lot of money way.

The lady and my dad talked of what seemed like for ever. Finally my dad walked over to where the iPods were because I was by the iPods.

"They don't have any more iPods and I tried to get an ipad mini but the don't have that ethier." My dad said. My face went from the ends of my lips to my ears to the grumpy cat face. Right when we were about to walk out. Of the store I heard the lady's voice.

"Wait!" She blurted out. My dad and I walked back over to her. She looked at another employee. It was an old man with gray hairs and he had a smile as bright as the sun. The lady walked me over to him. He turned around with an ipad mini in his cold wrinkled hands.
" I have a granddaughter and her birthday is coming up so I need your help starting up this ipad for her." he said quietly and calmly. You dont have to rub it in my face that she gets an ipad and i don't alright old man? i thought angrily. he gave the slightily smaller ipad to me and we walked to the start up station and the lady told me what to do and how to activate the glimmering ipad mini. First I started with putting in and iCloud account. " I want you to put YOUR iCloud account on. The lady said. "I don't have and iCloud account." I said with sadness. Then I started to get a little suspicious. Why did the lady tell me to make and iCloud account for me? And why did they pick me to activate the ipad if it's not mine? I rember when my mom and dad got me a dsi xl for christamas when i was seven and they said that they probloby would not get me one when they did so now i thought they were going to do that again are going to do that same thing again

    Soon when we were done with the activation thingy stuff my dad,the old wrinkly man and the nice lady who helped with the actovation all looked at me with a smerk on every single one of there faces.

    " you know how I said that the ipad was for my granddaughter?" The wrinkly old man questioned. "Yeah." I replied. " well it's actually for you." The man smiled. 

   But I'm not his granddau-- THAT'S NOT THE POINT! I thought to my self so full of excitement.
  As my dad and I approched the cash register with the ipad in the bag wrapped around my wrist i started to think about all the amazing things i would do on it. download games and music and NOT have to share any part of my presonal ipad. And at times like this I want to thank steve jobs for making the best thing ever!
   After my dad finished paying we walked out the store and asked the same man who gave my dad the valet parking pass to drive my dad's car back to us and as soon as the man did that we walked out of the mall and drovae away in no time at all.