The audition

  my hands trembled in fear, I had to get the acrobatic roll. 

"Ok, so we went over the lead roll auditions, so now it's time for cuts." mrs.Crystal announced. she called out for the jazz machine dolls one by one, " Diana, chase, Makayla, Jewel, Mckenzie, Kayla, and Nia." As she called out names we walked to the front of the crowd of the competition dance groups. we practically jumped when our mane was called. I was really exited when she called my name because this was my first year at legacy dance studio. then she called out for the Chinese Acrobat doll. I crossed my fingers and hoped for the best. " Since the is a solo the person I would like to do an acrobatic routine is Nia, who has been doing gymnastics."(120) 

I walked to the front again as everyone clapped and cheered for me. it was like a dream come true. have a featured roll, ON MY FIRST YEAR! even better I got a solo! this could be a good year. mrs. crystal called the other rolls for the Motown nutcracker like the skeletons, Michel, and turbo feet super action figures, ballerina toy solider, happy snowflakes, and purple snowflakes. I made the purple snowflakes, jazz machine, and the Chinese acrobat doll.(81) 

 

ten minute total= 201 words

my new braces

I sat in the dentist chair nervously. I was always nervous when I got a fresh pair of rubber bands. (20)

dr.song came in the room. he had on a mask, you know, like the ones surgeons use.

  " hi Nia! How are you? How are you doing with the braces? are there any problems?!" 

"well I ha-" 

" GOOD!" he exclaimed. seriously?!? you ask all these questions and don't even want an answer?!? I'm gonna have to talk faster. I thought. he put that napkin thingy under my chin and clipped it so it didn't fall off.(76)